the Little Red Reviewer

The Butcher of Khardov by Dan Wells (Hugo Nom)

Posted on: July 24, 2014


This is the story of how a monster known as The Butcher came in existence. And it’s got a nice little hook at the beginning: big scary crazy guy walks into a bar, and treats his axe as if she’s a flesh and blood woman.  Good hook, followed by tight pacing, we’re off to good start!

All monsters start out as little boys, and as a youth Orsus always felt he was to blame that he couldn’t save his family. Conveniently, he grows up to be about seven feet tall, and he’s got the right combination of body strength and gullibility to be a basic gang thug. The fantasy narrative jumps back and forth in his life, from that horrible day in his childhood when his family was killed in front of him, to his employment with a criminal organization, to the loss of his wife, to his ordering of a slaughter at a border village, to his judgement day in front of the queen.


I think it’s great that tie-in fiction is showing up on the Hugo ballot, but in all the ways that matter, this story just didn’t work for me.


Orsus  will pretty much do anything to ensure he can be violent with little to no consequences, and the violence simply became too much for me at a certain point.  Don’t get me wrong, I’ve read plenty of violent fiction, and I’m usually okay with it, but part of being okay with ultraviolent is understanding *why* the character is doing what they’re doing. you’re buying in to the character’s mentality, sympathizing with them.  And i never bought in to Orsus, I never felt like I got inside his head enough to sympathize with what he does during the story.  Okay, yes, I understand that he blames himself for his family being killed, and that he blames himself for horrible things happening to his wife. But beyond that, there wasn’t any “there” there. The guy just didn’t have much of a personality and I didn’t find his story to be very compelling.  There had to be something else going on here that I was missing.

Feeling lost and confused, I did some research. Turns out this is a tie in piece for the Warhammer 40K library.  Dan Wells has been into Warhammer for a long time, and had been invited to write an origin story for Orsus, a character who is a fan favorite. I’m sure if I was into Warhammer 40K, this story would thrill me. Now, if someone would just write a decent origin story for Liet Kynes and get it on the Hugo ballot, I can be one of those people cheering for a story that will have most readers scratching their heads in confusion.

3 Responses to "The Butcher of Khardov by Dan Wells (Hugo Nom)"

So this guy is a mass murderer. That’s fantasy these days? Give me dwarves, elves and dragons, quests and magic swords, please. The world is dark enough as it is, without what should be fun escape reading being dark and grim. Bah.

Liked by 1 person

It seemed like the story really wanted us to sympathize with the spree killer for some reason. I didn’t see anything in him with which to sympathize.


I know this is a super old post but I was looking up the book and your blog came up. Thank you for your summary and I’m happy that I got to read your review about it.

I just wanted to clarify something minor. Butcher is actually from a game called Warmachine which is similar to Warhammer 40k but instead of it being set in a sci-fi space universe, it’s set in a steam punk one. I know it doesn’t seem like something that matters but people who like a version of the game usually hate the other version so you can see how it can cause mass internet rage.

I love Warmachine as a game but the stories and books about the games are usually horrible and used to sell miniature figurines much like Saturday morning cartoons are used to sell toys and cereal.

I really wanted to find a good reason to like the stories because I love the game so much but I figured they wouldn’t be much better quality than fan fiction.

Thanks again for your review.


join the conversation

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s

Follow me on Twitter!

Enter your email address to subscribe to this blog and receive notifications of new posts by email.

Join 2,511 other followers

Follow the Little Red Reviewer on



FTC Stuff

some of the books reviewed here were free ARCs supplied by publishers/authors/other groups. Some of the books here I got from the library. the rest I *gasp!* actually paid for. I'll do my best to let you know what's what.
%d bloggers like this: